People show more antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes and how could be improve?

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People show more antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others. What are the causes and how could be improve?

Man is a social animal who live in society and move among all sorts of men. Nowadays, majority of people's behaviour is rude including rough behaviour and deprive of respect towards others. Here, i would like to endorse my views on this most burning issue comprising causes and remedies to address it.

There are manifold causes why people become victim of bad behaviour. First and foremost, deprivation of moral ethics among people, since from childhood leads them to rude behaviour. Moreover, less number of rules and regulation in life, is also one of the factor that make them more self reliant...

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Sentence: Secondly, not only rules, regulation and strictness should be must but punishment should also there to make them realise their mistake.
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