The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Forecasting is a hard job in all over the world because forecasters have to be up to date, precise about details and represent reliable information and this news is important for every people in the country. Therefore the process of collecting weather information is complicated as it’s given below.
First of all the data which obtained through satellites and radars are analyzed by expert specialist, then they prepare these information on computer and then through the TV news, Radio and other devices people could be awarded about every minutes weather forecasting.
This process is repeats several times every day even at night. You should now that people wants to know the weather casting of other parts of country or even other parts of the world especially for passengers, so it is clear collecting these data how difficult are. The amount of information is huge and should be obtained every minute.
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Sentence: This process is repeats several times every day even at night.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to is and repeats
so it is clear collecting these data how difficult are.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?
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No. of Words: 149 200
Minimum 150 words wanted.
They are extra info, you don't need to put those content:
'Forecasting is a hard job in all over the world because forecasters have to be up to date, precise about details and represent reliable information and this news is important for every people in the country.'
You just need to depict the graphs or charts.
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No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 149 200
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No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.5 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.973 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.618 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.166 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.458 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4