The diagram below shows a process for turning dirty water into clean water.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process used when cleansing dirty water into fresh water.
As can be seen from the diagram, in general, there are five main stages in which unclear water becomes clean water. First of all, dirty and muddy water is collected and spills into a bottle which has not a bottom and is put in inverse position. Then, the dirty and muddy water goes through a filter paper which is the first obstacle preventing unwanted substances. Afterwards, this liquid continues to pass through a second deterrence made by gravel small rocks. Thereafter, the third stages called fine sand lets the water go down with the same clarifying function. Subsequently, this liquid is adsorbed gradually by a final barrier which is named cotton wool filter. Consequently, the clean water step by step goes into a glass put under the cleansing bottle.
Overall, the diagram shows a single way to make fresh water with basis substances
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when cleansing dirty water into fresh water.
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