The diagrams below show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the diagram that illustrates how the design and functions of mobile phones have changed throughout the history. It can clearly be seen that, they have experienced several significant developments.
To begin with, both past and modern versions of mobile phones have key pad to receive information, the screen to display it and the earphone to enable speaking by it.
When it comes to the differences while the early cellular phones had black and white display options, the currents phones have fully colorful screens. Additionally, in design of new mobile phones plenty of extra functions...
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