Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of giving international aid to poor countries.
All of countries, especially poor countries, need good communication with the other countries, especially rich countries, because they will need each other when they have some problems. Basically, modern countries should be able to help hopeless countries when poor countries need their international support. International aid which is very useful has few advantages and disadvantages.
In the first place, the advantage number one is all of development countries have to show that they are kind and always help each other, so they must help all of second-rate countries when second-rate countries need them because they must make the other countries think positive about them. It is very important to create perfect communication and cooperation in the next time. Then, someday wealthy countries will have some problems about society, war, or catastrophe, so they will need service from the other countries. When all of countries think that rich countries which have some accidents are good in communication and cooperation, that rich countries will get everything easily.
On the other hand, an international aid also has disadvantages. One of them is some of poor countries will be spoiled if they are always helped by wealthy countries. When they have some problems, they do not want to solve their problems alone, and they will wait for an international aid from a development country. For example, Indonesia, one of second-rate country, always get a disaster every year, and it never wants to try to find a cause and solution about its problem.
In my conclusion, international support which is important has few advantages and disadvantages. So, what is your own opinion about that?
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