Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. use spesific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents who are teaching and saving me in my life are the best teacher for me. First time when I was born in the world parents teach me to speak, walk, read Al-Qur’an,etc. Parents are the best people who give me bad and good experience. I know all the tings from my parents, from small until big things. They always give me support and give me education.
Firstly, I would say parents are the best teacher in my life. They always teach about knowledge which we need in the world. They take care with me whom they love. Parents teach me how to talk, walk, read Al-Qur’an , take a pray ,etc. and they teach me from first and slowly until I understand and I can do it. Parents never teach me about bad things but they always teach me about good things. Parents make me happy and they make me could to look future withs support from them.
secondly, the parents are have responsible with their children’s . Like give education, insurance, and must support their children’s. Parents give me education since I was child until now. Beside this, they make health insurance for me, if I get problem with my body I could use that insurance. All of I want parents always support me, but in positive not in negative. There is not everyone that could change my parents in my life.
Thirdly, Parents always give me money and something important for me. They always give me money whenever I go . Since I was at elementary school parents give me Handphone. Why they give me Handphone? They give me it to save communication between us , it is because my parents often go out of town.
In conclusion, Parents are good teacher, best teacher in my life. They have numerous manner to make me happy,eventhough they get some trouble. They always remind me to still in my way. Parents are everything for me.
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Sentence: All of I want parents always support me, but in positive not in negative.
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Sentence: They give me it to save communication between us , it is because my parents often go out of town.
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Sentence: Parents make me happy and they make me could to look future withs support from them.
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