Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more poeple are eating it.
Why are more people eating fast food?
What can be done about this problem?
Academics and scientists have recently demonstrated that fast food is bad for our health. For those who don’t believe in academics, I suggest them to watch the documentary “Supersize me”. In this movie, the protagonist eats at McDonald for a month straight: if he had continued for another month, now he would be probably dead.
Despite what doctors are saying, an increasing number of people eat fast food all over the world. Why do they do so? To find the answer, it is useful to consider three factors: taste, advertisement, time. First of all, the taste is good because of all the sauces ...
- The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.Write at least 150 words. 53
- The chart below shows the percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 54
- Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries.While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages.Do you agree or disagree? 70
- The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 80
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 75
Sentence: In this cases, fast food is there just waiting for you.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and cases
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/ielts
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1525 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.308 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.598 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.819 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.252 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.436 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5