Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more poeple are eating it.Why are more people eating fast food?What can be done about this problem?

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Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more poeple are eating it.
Why are more people eating fast food?
What can be done about this problem?

Academics and scientists have recently demonstrated that fast food is bad for our health. For those who don’t believe in academics, I suggest them to watch the documentary “Supersize me”. In this movie, the protagonist eats at McDonald for a month straight: if he had continued for another month, now he would be probably dead.

Despite what doctors are saying, an increasing number of people eat fast food all over the world. Why do they do so? To find the answer, it is useful to consider three factors: taste, advertisement, time. First of all, the taste is good because of all the sauces ...

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