Expenditure on Fast Foods by income Groups, UK 1990.
The vertical graph reveals an information about expenditures on three fast food items Hamburger,Fish or Chips and pizza by High income, Average income and Low income groups from Ingland in 1990 year.
It can be clearly seen that most pence were spent on Hamburger compareson other fast food itemsitems.Hamburger were expended more then 40 pence by High income followed by Avarge income and Low income with about 30 pence and near about 20 pence. Moreover Fish and Chips were accounted for 25pence by Average income but more than 15 pence were consumed by Low and High income proportion of masses equaly .
The bar chart highlights the three times more than Low income about 6 pence were invested by High income groupgroup where as 13pence consumed by Average income on Pizza.
To sum up , almost maximum pence were spent on Hamburger however minimum pence were consumed for Pizza in UK 1990.
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Sentence: It can be clearly seen that most pence were spent on Hamburger compareson other fast food itemsitems.Hamburger were expended more then 40 pence by High income followed by Avarge income and Low income with about 30 pence and near about 20 pence.
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Sentence: Moreover Fish and Chips were accounted for 25pence by Average income but more than 15 pence were consumed by Low and High income proportion of masses equaly .
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Sentence: The bar chart highlights the three times more than Low income about 6 pence were invested by High income groupgroup where as 13pence consumed by Average income on Pizza.
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