The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destination over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The first chart informs the answers of a-hundred sample people who traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998 from Britain. While this chart shows the purpose, the second chart shows the destination during the same period.
The first chart gives information about the purpose of visiting another country during 5-years. The main purpose was holiday with more than 14,000 inhabitants each year. The second aim was business and see friends and family which has around 3,000 people every year. However, the least was the other reasons with less than 1,500 visitors a year. This chart shows that in the end of the period was the most crowded holiday with 28,828 visitors from Britain.
On the other hand, the second chart gives information about the destination of English to go abroad during the same period. The most favorite destination was Western Europe with around 20,000 visitors during 5-years. The next favorite destination was other areas with around 2,000 visitors each year while North America was the last position with only about one-thousand people in a year. Also, this chart shows that the graph of visitors was fluctuated during a 5-year period.
In short, these charts show the same graphs. Both of them showed the decrease of visitors in 1995 and slightly increase in the last three years.
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