The table depicts the result of a survey conducted in 100,000 regarding their purpose of travel abroad in the span of 5 years (1994 to 1998). Moreover, the bar graph compares their travel destination in the same year.
Overall, there is a significantly increasing number of United Kingdom residents who traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998. It is mostly for an excursion on the holidays.
Initially, in 1994, there were 22,702 UK residents who went abroad, and 15,246 of them had a holiday vacation. Whereas, 3,155 of them went on a business trip. After a year the total number of travelers declined slightly to more than a thousand but had it's come back on the following year and rose gradually to 28,828 in the year 1998.
Furthermore, their most favorite travel destination is in Western Europe that accounts for almost 20,000 residents in 1994. But, it had fallen to 18,000 in 1995, until it rose up and reached it's peaked to 25,000 in 1998. There is also a small proportion of travel goers who went to other areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is a significantly increasing number of United Kingdom residents who traveled ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76404494382 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55323326906 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0257607229 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208971538526 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879992909489 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681972353999 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140802798172 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711315215617 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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