At present, humans’ energy consumption has been increasing at an alarming rate. Some argue that governments should further promulgate the use of renewable sources of energy. The writer of this essay unequivocally agrees due to the gradual decline of our energy reserves and its detrimental effects on our environment.
Around 500 million years, there is a rich source of fossil fuel and has been the major source of energy of the human race until now, from heating our home, lighting the streets and fuelling up our cars and different engines. According to a recent study, 85% of the world’s population is dependent on coil, oil and natural gas. However, no matter how abundant the supply of fossil fuels, we cannot ignore the fact that these energy sources are non-renewable and will soon be depleted. In fact, no one can exactly tell when the supply will exactly run out. Some say in 50 years, some predict in 100 to 120 years while according to the US Energy department, our supply can reach up to early 22nd century if the demand will not increase. Moreover, there is a gradual increase in demand for energy due to the rise of the population around the world. Using alternative sources of energy can suffice to the demand for energy consumption in the future. For instance, according to the European government, the use of solar energy can provide energy for 1 billion in 2020. Hence, it is the governments’ responsibility to seek alternative sources of energy to make sure that countries will not experience blackout or lack of oil and natural gas supply.
Furthermore, the continuous use of fossil fuels has been one of the causes of global warming. Burning of coils add up to the carbon dioxide on the atmosphere and digging up of oil reservoir in the depths of the ocean causes harm on different marine species due to oil spills. Using renewable sources of energy can help lessen the pollution from these fossil fuel source. For example, hybrid cars that are powered by solar panels decrease carbon dioxide emission which decreases air pollution and lessen oil consumption.
In conclusion, the government should make a move to develop the use of alternative energy sources to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels and decrease its harmful effects on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97402597403 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77967710782 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503896103896 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1921723486 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100869456945 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396581156601 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556135305797 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08641587392 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537154348971 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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