Sleep is vital for our bodily function. Unfortunately, at present, people tend to sleep less than many years ago. This is because the majority of their time is allocated to work which leads to fatigue and other health problems.
Due to the high standards of living today, people worked longer hours to meet their needs and their families as well. In order to have sufficient funds for the payment of bills, basic commodities, insurance policies, and even for recreation and leisure, workers are rendering overtime hours while some are having two or more part-time jobs which compromise their sleeping hours. For instance in a survey, the majority of the expats here in the United Arab Emirates and extending at least 2 hours and even working on weekends and holidays for an additional payment. Also, according to the study conducted by the Social Weather Station, 85% of Filipino Overseas Filipino Workers across the globe are working on extra hours and had double jobs in order to send a higher remittance to their families in the Philippines. Moreover, it was published in the Nature Reviews Neuroscience that there is a “precipitous decline in sleep duration throughout industrialized nations”.
A complete 8 hour sleep is essential for our body to recuperate from the effects of our work throughout the day. But due to the extended working hours, the required hours of sleep is rare nowadays. This results in an inability to concentrate on work, fatigue and other health problems such as heart disease, high blood pressure, depression and more. It was emphasized on the study conducted by Harvard University that initially, majority of people who lack sleep tend to feel tired and exhausted but habitual inadequate sleep leads to fatal health consequences, injuries and even death.
As the old people say, everything that is in excess or lacking is bad, same as with the shorter sleeping hours and longer hours at work. However, due to the high costs of living, working additional hours is inevitable which deficient sleep, hence, resulting in fatigue and other health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79055810027 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1387208339 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187440221488 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779202447183 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857109908833 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140398738354 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617160096527 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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