A friend of yours is going on a holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before Say where you went where you stayed what you can do there and what the

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A friend of yours is going on a holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.

Begin you letter as follows:
Dear Sarah,

Dear Sarah,

I hope you are well and enjoying the new job. It is quite exciting that you are going on a holiday and want me to suggest a place to you.

As you know, I am an avid traveler so I have been to many places, but I would like to recommend the Gold Coast to you. It's the most ravishing place that I have ever been to. It's not only the place that attracts you but the food and culture as well. I stayed in a hotel near Surfers paradise where I enjoyed the cool breeze of sea air and the sunshine. There are millions of things that you can do at sea world and Disney land, where you can e...

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