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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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By: Hoang Anh

Given are the graph and table illustrating water consumption worldwide during the period of 100 years from 1000 to 2000 as well as water utilisation in 2 different nations in 2000.

It is evident from the information provided that the use of water for agricultural purposes was by far the highest in all 3 sectors whereas in term of national level, Brazil outweighted the remaining country in the amount of water consumption.

To be more specific, a dramatic decrease was seen in the utilisation of water in the 100 years - periods, from 500 km3 in 1900 to well over 3000 km3 in ...

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Sentence: Industrial areas followed a similar pattern in term of water use when it's figure rose by nearly 1000 km3.
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