The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This graph shows us the consumption of Fuel Energy from 2008 in USA since 1980 until 2030. There are six fuel types in this graph, such as Petrol & Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower.
In the 1980 until 1990, Petrol & Oil dropped down from 35 to 31 and raised to 35 again. There was s steadily increased in Coal line from 17 to 18. Natural Gas was same like Petrol & Oil. It was got decreased and then up again. Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower are had the same movement that they slightly dropped.
From 1990 to 2010, Petrol & Oil was still steadily increased and getting higher until 40. The rest of the fuel type were still slightly rise and did not move further.
There are some prediction of fuel consumption after 2013 to 2030. US government predict that Petrol & Oil will increase until almost 50. Coal will assump until 30 and Natural Gas until 25. The rest predict will not rise too far just between 3 until 8.
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Sentence: The rest of the fuel type were still slightly rise and did not move further.
Description: The fragment the fuel type is not usually followed by were
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Sentence: US government predict that Petrol & Oil will increase until almost 50.
Description: The fragment government predict that is rare
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Sentence: Coal will assump until 30 and Natural Gas until 25.
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Sentence Length SD: 3.697 7.5
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Category: Good Excellent
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