IELTS essay: Computers can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations. Do you think that children should spend more time learning basic mathematics or advanced computer technology?
In the world of today high-tech computers are assisting humans in every kind of work. They help humans in daily tasks like solving mathematical equations or doing doing homework. Armed forces are fighting wars by the help of high-tech computers. If children will operate too much computer so they will be able to become more intelligent, fast and smarter. Children's mental health will increase. On the other hand, some people argue that literacy in children is decreasing and they are becoming computer based. Their own intelligence is declining day by day.
The modern economy is co...
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Sentence: The modern economy is computerized every work is taken from computers; even wars are fighting by computers.
Suggestion: The modern economy is computerized; Every work is taken from computers;
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.29 7.5
The paragraphs in essay body are too short.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 280 350
No. of Characters: 1384 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.091 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.943 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.687 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.29 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.51 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5