Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?
The world is switching swiftly into a machinery system. Population also, is growing fast along with that. Nowadays, almost every individual owns a car and this has led to traffic digests and subsequently air pollution. Some people believe that increasing the price of petrol can be an effective way to overcome this problem. In my view this can be an efficient policy along with alarming people about the catastrophic consequences of using cars.
To commence with, technological advances have come to facilitate our lives. Accordingly, people’s expectations have risen. In other words, one tends ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-10 | dido272000 | 80 | view |
| 2013-05-22 | Rushil Chulani | 65 | view |
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- Many people believe it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position. 70
- The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult americans in two of years. 90
- Do young people today make good use of their leisure time Or do they spend too much time watching television and playing video games instead of taking part in more productive activities 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 80
Sentence: Furthermore, authorities should aware citizens of health problems followed by the air pollution.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to should and aware
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1567 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.104 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.841 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.056 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.175 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5