Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
It is true accumulate price of petrol is the best way to overcome traffic jam and pollution condition. However, it would be appearing another problematic. If there are any gaps concerning of this matters, this may cause problems in understanding. It ammunition me in some reasons.
At first, raising up the petrol creates people become indolent to use car or motorcycle due to the price of petrol getting more expensive. In this way some people might probably convert to public transportation. Nevertheless, it could be not working in Some-land, because they do not have proper mode of transportation. Many criminal activities on the street that makes uncomfortable for these people is one of the reason why people did not want to use public transportation in a country.
Meanwhile, the point of view that increasing price petrol is the great way to solve the traffic growth and pollution condition. It sounds there is no ways of tackling these problems. We must remember too that a lot of people maybe most of people would be feel a sense of loss when these policy applied in society. The situation become unstable and potentially dangerous. There will be chain reaction that occurs when a small change causes a similar change It seems a cumulative effects sets off a chain of same event. For instant, effect on dearth of primary goods, occurring heaps, some companies will not operate because they not be able to buy the petrol as the fuel of machine, if they able it would be creates expenses. Another effect is related to public transportation which will accelerate the price. Number of criminal will accrue, and it would be affecting the economy of a state. In addition, it is some people who state this opinion.
To summarize, inclining price of petrol to cure traffic growth and pollution condition could produce people become indolent instead of using vehicles. Although, it might possibly to appear some matter will also attract considerable attention.
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