The Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledg

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The Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the past many people still used a difficult manner to connect to the other people. A traditional manner was used Carrier Pigeon and Postman. It’s used for people who want to send a letter who needed much time. Telegraph was the one of the new inventions which helped people in the last War World I and II. To send a message, some people used codes, which were called telegram. Afterwards, codes made other people difficult to know each other. This makes technology which is getting more and more advances.

Computer, Satellite, and Internet are a big new invention in the world. This is the worldwide, where Internet can be used to communicate the other people in the world. Today, many people use Internet for education, business and entertainment, and for example sending a message with email, chatting with video call, and uploading video. With Internet invention, sending a message is easier than in the past. Also, some people can find anything about information, news, sports, and the others.

In 20th century, Internet is very important to give information and to link other people in the world. For example, without Internet, the world seems like an isolated place, where people can’t be connected to other people. Relationship amongst friends who live in different countries will be simple. At office, Internet can be a Network system, such as sharing Computers and sharing Printers, and has function for connecting other users.

To conclude, people in the fast developing countries are necessary to use Internet access and also still need post officers to send hard copy of letters.

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