In many parts of the world children s lives were very different from today What do you think were the were the advantages and disadvantages of live for children in the past

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In many parts of the world, children’s lives were very different from today.
What do you think were the were the advantages and disadvantages of live for children in the past

There are some advantages and disadvantages of children who live in the past and the present. The advantages are very traditional games. In the past, children spent their free time playing outside with other children who lived nearby. Also, they were more courageous and enjoyed dangerous activities: climbing trees, swimming in the river and playing traditional games. Although there was no television, computer and mobile phone, they lived happily.

On the other hand, the disadvantages were some children who lived in the past not being under pressure to be success in school. They didn’t know about technology and just played and played again every day with no overburden activities. It’s different than children who live today.

Nowadays, children are familiar with high technology, such as television, video games and mobile phones. Everyday children overwhelmed with education, which starts to Paud Education, Kindergarten, and Elementary School. In the past, some children went to school by foot, but now by car. For rich family, there are babysitters to take care for children. It’s very different in the past.

In the past, children lived with less convenience rather than nowadays. Some children who had television could watch kid’s films which very admired and were more educated, such as Mc Gyver, Masked Black Rider, Magic Teapot, Oshin, Inuyasha, etc. As a result, there are many benefits for children who lived in the past rather than in the present, which depends on generation that the children live.

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