It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discus both these views and give your own opinion
It is indisputably admitted that families and other educational centers, as we all are aware and have probably experienced, not only can shed light on the dark aspects of every individual’s survival, but also pave the path for the flourishing every child’s talent and skills in divers levels of life. There is number of people, believing that some individuals have talents in particular activities such as sport or music, which are with them from the day that they were born and the rest do not have it. Others are of the point of view that all children have the ability to learn activities and can be trained to be professional at them. In psychologist’s viewpoint although some people are born with some talents, it does not mean that they can use it without training.
Firstly, the ones who say if one is not born with a talent it means that he cannot achieve the talent, commonly tend to be more pessimistic. They believe that being a good musician or an expert athletic requires a talent that is not achievable and it should be in their blood.
Further more, I would like to mention some of the views of the second group who claim that every kid can learn how to become an expert. They think all children have an ability to increase their talents and skills and on the contrary of the first group they believe there is no issue named born with a certain talent. In addition all types of people can become professional in all kinds of activities.
All in all, all these long stories come down to the fact that in spite of the fact that some people are born with certain talents, but it seems fair to assume that most of skills that everyone has are due to the trainings that he got.
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