It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? why?
Society nowadays cannot separated from education, talking about education surely also discussing about knowledge. We are needed learning various knowledge. In common sight,it can be increased our ability which we can get it on several ways.Science is now being used an asset for everyone whom owned, learned and on progress to be an insightful person, fewer learn it means fewer gain.
The first thing that I should be noted education is not only got from books, knowledge basic of experience is more priceless. Experience constantly can evolution your bad personality being good, because I already known plenty persons can be reached their dreams caused their only imitated and applied what they got according their experience, it showed that they learned by their own fault and searched new ways towards their targets.Takes one for the sample, Chairul Tandjoeng is one of the most influential businessmen in Indonesia Country, he started his success from zero to be a hero, it was very precious like a diamond at desert. That is why a legends ever said that experience is the best teacher during your life.
Personally, I also believe that books had many advantages and essentials for my life, especially concern education,I was learned numerous kinds of book in formal education. Books give us much science since ten centuries ago till now. We can absorb varieties materials of subject in each books we read. Learning new sciences from books is good methods to know lessons contained them. Reading more make persons understood profound the contents of books. An example, I studied Psychology book, I can help someone who got psychiatric problems. It was so meaningful for me and useful to help other persons.
To compare two sight concerning where the best important knowledge gained for, science from experience or books. It puts inside two different bowl, which absolutely has several benefits. Every people include myself, live as social human, as a human should be interacted each other. In some cases, there is several inhabitants became individualism at one country, it case caused of they were too addicted of books without cared their social environment. I do not want be like them.
In conclusion, although these two sight are valuable to increase my science during life, but every people has own opinions. So, I prefer choose knowledge base of experience as essential source than books to through my daily life.
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Society nowadays cannot separated from education
Society nowadays cannot be separated from education
talking about education surely also discussing about knowledge.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
entence: We can absorb varieties materials of subject in each books we read.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to varieties and materials
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and books
Sentence: Reading more make persons understood profound the contents of books.
Description: The fragment more make persons is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: In some cases, there is several inhabitants became individualism at one country, it case caused of they were too addicted of books without cared their social environment.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to it and case
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to of and they
Sentence: So, I prefer choose knowledge base of experience as essential source than books to through my daily life.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and through
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'which','whom' is not used properly
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