It is often said that subjects taught in school are too academic in orientation and it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is the basic demand for the modern and competitive society. To be educated means to explore the world theoretically, practically and socially. Combination of all the subjects leads a person to become a gentleman.
Academics are important to know about the fundamentals of the language and can be considered as the root of the education. Development of a human is only possible if he know how to read and write.In addition to it academics are based on the experience and thoughts of the scholars. Theory teaches a student about the best conclusions and about the mistakes of the human bei...
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Sentence: Development of a human is only possible if he know how to read and write.In addition to it academics are based on the experience and thoughts of the scholars.
Description: The fragment he know how is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace know with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Without academics the student will not able to learn the technical part behind the practical and without practical he can not understand how to apply the theory.
Description: The fragment without practical he is rare
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 272 350
No. of Characters: 1342 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.934 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.795 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.192 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5