To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement? Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?
Adopting the best quote “regardless logistic our logic does not work” which indicate our topic that healthy foods are quite notable to maintain health. Not only do children have to consume healthy food, but all people also need healthy meal to give energy and more active in the daily activities. Standing in contrast, why should children consume a healthy meal? The answer is common, because their bodies are still growing.
Most people agree with this statement that children have to eat a healthy food. It will be a problem for children when they are not getting enough nutrition from health...
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I've changed some grammatical
I've changed some grammatical mechanics you have mentioned. Please kindly recheck the correction above. Thanks.
Still 7.0. grammatical errors
Still 7.0. grammatical errors are not serious. sentences need to be polished.
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Mr.Big, could you show me the
Mr.Big, could you show me the mistakes of this essay? what is the trigger i get 7, beside grammatical error? thanks in advance.
Hello tiads, I think grammar
Hello tiads, I think grammar errors is the first thing you need to fix. Then you should focus on the structure of your article. More importantly, you need try your best to write an academic essay rather than a personal comment.
If we compare a kid who has breakfast at home than who does not have breakfast,
If we compare a kid who has breakfast at home than those who does not have breakfast,
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1712 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.769 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.265 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.095 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.225 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.479 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5