In many countries, students who behave badly in class are expelled from their school and never allowed to return. Many consider this an effective way to educate while others disagree.
Discuss both sides of the argument and share your opinion. Where possible, support your points with personal examples.
Most schools have devised their own set of rules and regulations to which students must abide to or risk expulsion in some cases. Some people contend that permanently barring a badly-behaved student from an educational establishment act as an excellent moral lesson for children. Nevertheless, others prose that this treatment may be unfair and bear a negative consequence on children’s development under certain circumstances.
On one hand, permanent expulsion for wrongdoings can educate children into growing into law-abiding and responsible citizens. Indeed, they come to learn about acceptab...
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