In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study and work in cities. What do you think are reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Along with the rapid development of global economy, young people are tending to move from countryside to big cites to work or study. The essay will address the root cause of this tendency before reaching the conclusion why I strongly believe that the disadvantages outnumber its advantages.
To begin with, the truth holds that there are two predominant causes relating to this trend. In the first place; schools, universities and firms, which are well-known in their fields, always concentrate in big cities such as Hanoi and HCMC. Therefore, it causes the transitions of young people to these cities for studying and working. Besides that, big cities normally receive a great deal of concern from the government and local authorities. They spent money investing in infrastructures, road systems, hospital and so on; as a result, the standard of living is significantly improved. Consequently, people living in rural areas, are tending to move to cities with the aim of looking for better lives.
However, it is argued by some people that this trend is not really conducive to the mankind. First and foremost, the transitions would create a great pressure on public services for instance public transport, health care, facilities and so on. It increases the bumper to bumper traffics, incessant roar in crowed areas leading to the impairment of standard of living. Furthermore, there are some arguments that this tendency not only makes higher unemployment rates but also the criminal rates in society. It is because the job market becomes more competitive when working demand goes up dramatically while jobs are limited. Therefore, authorities would have to spend more money on unemployment insurance and public protecting, so that budget deficit is inevitable.
Broadly speaking, although moving tendency may bring about some beneficial impacts, its disadvantages seem to overweigh advantages. Nonetheless, I honestly think that the situation would be improved if the government could propose some feasible solutions to deal with these problems.
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