Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
There is no doubt that the public hold the view that people who have crime record have more changes to offend the law compared with the one who does not. There are multiform reasons in relation to the thesis and it is necessary to resolve the problem radically through implementing methods accordingly.
There are numerous factors leading to offenders’ second crime commitment. Firstly, it is because of poverty, unemployment and lack of education. After punishment, criminals often found them difficult to find a job since fewer of them ever get the chances to master a technic skill. As a conse...
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Sentence: There is no doubt that the public hold the view that people who have crime record have more changes to offend the law compared with the one who does not.
Description: The fragment public hold the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace hold with verb, past tense
it is the responsibility for the government provides education and vocational training
it is the responsibility for the government to provide education and vocational training
Sentence: After punishment, criminals often found them difficult to find a job since fewer of them ever get the chances to master a technic skill.
Error: technic Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1508 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.31 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5