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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
There is no doubt that, sometimes, punishment rarely means that novel criminal will stop crime. There are various anti-social and unprofessionalism reasons behind this. In this essay, I will contend these reasons more thoroughly and unveil suggestions to at least lower this issue.
The foremost cause is bad company that increases the chances of further crime. When after first crime, a criminal go to jail, he meets to his inmates. This is very obvious that bunch of bad people cannot give unbiased direction to their new comer. For instance, in India, Prasad Kong, who unintentionally hit a woma...
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Sentence: In this essay, I will contend these reasons more thoroughly and unveil suggestions to at least lower this issue.
Description: The fragment more thoroughly and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace thoroughly with adjective
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Suggestion: Refer to to and at
Sentence: When after first crime, a criminal go to jail, he meets to his inmates.
Description: The fragment criminal go to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace go with verb, past participle
Sentence: For instance, the skill like car maintenance, plumber and perfect electrician can help them to at least open their own business even if they do not get other work.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and at
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 1962 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.66 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.415 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.542 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.979 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.257 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.475 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5