In many parts of the world, children’s lives were very different from today.What do you do think were the advantages and disadvantages of life for children in the past ?

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In many parts of the world, children’s lives were very different from today.
What do you do think were the advantages and disadvantages of life for children in the past ?

In this contemporary time, life is much easier and faster than the past. This also happen to the children’s live. It can change children’s habit. In the past, there were positive impact and negative ones to have a slower way of life.

There were a number of beneficial effects of children’s pace of life in the past. Firstly, children are spending free time playing outside with other children who lived nearby. The otherwise enjoying dangerous activities like climbing trees or swimming in rivers. In other opinion, walking home from school, rather than being taken in their parent’s car. In addition, spending more time with family members than with babysitters are the best way to give them an good education also. The last, not being under pressure to be successful at school.

At contras, in my view, the slower pace of life for children also have unfavourable ones. Children not having a TV, computer or mobile phone. They will not improve about the latest technology which can make the more up to date their information. So, if one day they will grow up, it can make more difficult to face the world and being uncompetitive person.

In a nutshell, I am convinced that the disadvantages of the slower way of life in the past were the bigger than the advantages for children. Children can do their outside activity or having more free time with family members but they were not always able to get benefit from it, because they could not have competitive habit. They also not ready to encounter the improvement of life, whereas world always growing up day by day.

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