In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?
One of the consequences of globalization is the growing influence of multinational companies in people lives. Their products range, nowadays, from food market to the car one, just to quote two situations of our everyday experience where multinational influence is strongly perceived. In my opinion, this influence is mainly negative because multinational products affect the chance of local products to compete in the market, substituting goods and services that were previously customized for local needs.
First of all, multinational products are often characterized by low prices, a key factor t...
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Thank you very much, your advice is very helpful.
I am using it to structure my next essays in a better way.
Cheers
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Try to follow the model answer. Every paragraph has one argument. You have a lot of ideas in one paragraph.
Follow this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1634 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.34 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.112 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.109 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5