“Most old people are suffering from two main problems. One of them is loneliness and the second one is poor fitness. What are the causes of these problems and what could be done to reduce the effects that might result from these problems?”
Many old people suffer from loneliness and poor fitness. This has developed to a huge problem of today’s society. In order to solve these problems we must find an efficient solution. But before solving any problems the causes of these problems must be analysed.
One of the first reasons why old people feeling lonely, is that their children alienate from them by creating their own families. Children completely separate from their parents and consequently, pay less attention to them. In addition to that, for some people it is a burden to look after their elderly parents, so they just...
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