News editors can decide what they want to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. Do you agree or disagree?
News editors can decide what they want to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. I prefer to agree with this statement because bad news can influence someone and it is better if they prioritize to report good news.
Social media can influence someone to be good man or bad people. Television and newspaper are part of it. These have reason why people should be selective. First, people think that it can publish in under control. It means an under control of news can educate people become well with new information, such as culture of nations and technology. Besides, editors must selective to bring a case of news among broadcast on television and newspaper. For a good case, news from television always blurred the image who became a victim in a car accident. Because a victim is unreasonable to be shown, electronic media should sensor it from teenager.
Television should share education news such as Discovery Channel and National Geographic. It can influence people to obtain new information in positive side. Meanwhile, information from newspaper has different content with television. Newspaper can provide us with high explanation, advance words, and high writing style which cannot understand with children easily. Thus, news editors can select what they want to show in both of television and newspaper for age types.
Furthermore, people become used with bad news nowadays. Television and newspaper now provide us with same popular case. Take look in 21st December ago, we surprised with issued about the end of the world, and it supported by Mayan’s calendar. Then, it receives viewer of social media become afraid about what happens at that time. In this case, I think it is better reporter can provide people only good news.
Conclusively, some news can be shown in the right position and reasonable.
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