now a days families are not as close as they used to be in past what are the causes and solutions to solve this problem?
family play a phenominal role in everyone's life.it is a fact we do not choose our family they are god gifted to us but these days,there are no strong harmonious relations between members of the family,so that families are not as close they were in the past.there could be many cause and remedy behind this fix,so i would like to discuss root cause behind differences and give solution to this problem.
to commence with,generation gap is gigantic factor for this problem as there is lot of difference between thinking of youth and late adulthood so,they do not prefer to spend time with each other...
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Sentence: family play a phenominal role in everyone's life.
Description: The fragment family play a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense
Sentence: Mostly youngster prefer to live in nuclear families rather then joint families on account of they do not want any interfarence of their parents or gaurdians, each and every individual wants to be on their own opinion and life style of living which may vice_versa of customs or marals of late adulthood.
Description: The fragment Mostly youngster is rare
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Suggestion: Refer to of and they
Sentence: family play a phenominal role in everyone's life.
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Sentence: Mostly youngster prefer to live in nuclear families rather then joint families on account of they do not want any interfarence of their parents or gaurdians, each and every individual wants to be on their own opinion and life style of living which may vice_versa of customs or marals of late adulthood.
Error: marals Suggestion: morals
Error: gaurdians Suggestion: guardians
Error: interfarence Suggestion: interference
Sentence: Childern are busy in their studies or in extra coaching like touchions, dance classes, yoga classes, singing classes etc. Parents are busy in their own works, no one as time for each other due to these reasons, childern use to spend their leisure time on computers like playing vedio games, internet, watching movies.
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Sentence: Thus, these sercumstances play role of dividing them.
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Sentence: to bridge the gap between family member, we should take remedial measures continuously, one should spend free time with their children by having meal together, oraganizing some familiy function in their home or having great fun by inviting friend, kith and kins or enjoying some music, dance with them it may reduce the difference or some other conditions like have reaguler contact by vedio calling, chating, making phone calls etc such little preventions will be taken by every individual then it
Error: familiy Suggestion: family
Error: vedio Suggestion: veil
Error: kith Suggestion: kit
Error: oraganizing Suggestion: organizing
Error: reaguler Suggestion: regular
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Sentence: to sum up, i would like to mention that both should take part in it and every individual must share joint responsiblity to eradicate these problems.
Error: responsiblity Suggestion: responsibility
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 468 350
No. of Characters: 2223 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.651 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.75 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.452 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.529 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.151 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5