Nowaday, more and more people are migrating to urban areas. What are the pros and cons of living in urban areas. Discuss with your opinion.
In this rampant age of globalization, the lifestyle of people is gaining ground very swiftly. In these days, people are migrating to urban areas. There are manifold facilities in cities such as high quality education, a great deal of amusement and many mulit-national companies where they get magnificient jobs and earn money for their children. By contrast, it has darker side too. Here, I would like to establish both pros and cons of urban areas of my perception.
To set in, there are manifold advantages of urban areas. First and foremost, migrating to cities allows people to get various type of aminities like marvellous sources of entertainment like museum for playing special places and parks where they sit and get rid of their stress and gossips with each others. In addition, thete are big multi-national companies where they get good jobs according to their education and they earn and save money for their family that upgrad their life states. What is more, in the urban aeras, thet get optimum transportation services to move to and fro. thus, they can save their high quality education in college, school and universities and get more and more knowledge about their subject and business. Cities have wild-rangs of shops like big shops, malls and showrooms where people can buy accessories and thing of basic needs.
Conversely, there are numerous disadvantages of urban areas, firstly people face many health problems in the cities such as noise, air and water pollution. These are creating various type of diseases like brain tumour and fever. Environment contaminations is being too much worse day by day. In the city mostly people use own vehicles those are creating gridlock some time it makes a case of accident and many time people lose their lives in dangerous accident.
From my notion, migrating in urban cities have both positive and negative sides. One side, we get many aminities in cities like as hospital services, jobs and employment services. We can take hygenic, nuteritional and other refreshment things from markets. On the other hand, those people live in cities they expend money by wrong way.
In a nutshell, urban areas give us manifold facilities but on the other side, environment is most striking factor on our health problems. We should try to neat and clean urban areas environment.
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