Nowadays doctors can become very rich Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patients health no matter how rich they are

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Nowadays doctors can become very rich. Maybe they should not focus on profitable activities such as plastic surgery or looking after rich patients and concentrate more on patients health, no matter how rich they are?

At present, in this world there are too many doctors. On Earth, people are rich and poor. Illness is affected to both.

If a rich gets ill its easy for him to get treatment. Whereas for the poor its too difficult to get treatment because they go to a Government Hospital as it is free. Where the doctor takes time to arrive as he is busy with his Private Clinic where he charges the patients, if luckily the doctor arrives he checks the patient, some pills would be suggested to be taken from a shop where he has its own percentage earnings the medicines wont be there in government hospital. Moreo...

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