Nowadays, environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Throughout human history, people have been generating their life power by using natural resources. In a changing world, during this process they have been used technology which has damaged our environment. According to this, there are some who hold the opinion that, to get rid of this damage, governments should take precautions globally, whereas others share a different point of view. In my case, the two major effect of this change is ‘global warming’ and ‘non effective resolutions’.
The people who say that, problems cannot be solved personally have some notable arguments. To begin ...
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Description: The token to is not usually followed by a negator
Suggestion: Refer to to and not
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Sentence Length SD: 4.91 7.5
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1560 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
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