Nowadays in some countries, single young adults prefer to live outside of their parents homes, they usually leave to study or work in different places. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
It is true more and more youths prefer to be stay away from their parent’s home and pursue further education and employment at some different place. This essay will discuss some the benefits and drawbacks.
To begin with, one of the important advantages of staying away from home is these helps youngster to stay independently and face most of the challenges alone in the societies. Another positive point is those who wish to study higher education in different fields can have multiple choices of the universities. In addition, it is also easier for them to attend private coaches. For exampl...
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Sentence: It is true more and more youths prefer to be stay away from their parent's home and pursue further education and employment at some different place.
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Sentence: To begin with, one of the important advantages of staying away from home is these helps youngster to stay independently and face most of the challenges alone in the societies.
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Sentence: Another positive point is those who wish to study higher education in different fields can have multiple choices of the universities.
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Sentence: Those who are away from their parent's home always rent or buy the home near the organization for convenience and to reduce travel time to the company, but this have a negative impact, in case of any urgency in the company even in mid of night, seniors will always call these guys first, who are staying nearby the company.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 442 350
No. of Characters: 2144 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.585 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.851 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.527 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.263 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.789 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5