Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Over three century after the revolution industry, the advancement of technology grows rapidly. The results of high invention are bringing human to change the way of life, some people argue that the way to keep touch between person and person has been changing and substitute the varying of social bounding, citizens believe that is good opportunity. Conversely, many people condemn against that perception.
Be in doubt of that, technology is pivotal thing in modern life and it is useful to assist human’s duty in work field or office. Internet, for example, is really useful to robust the way to communicate rather than used telegraph in past era. It is essential technology changing the relationships to become beneficial for human life.
In spite of the massive contribution of the technology in modern life, many people reject to the perception of technology that technology could bring benefit for relationship. Take one for example the impact of technology on environment. Common perception believes that the relation among people in the world becomes easier that in the past since the invention of aeroplane, people can go travel without barriers especially time. Honestly, the aeroplan is the most transportation which is significant to contribute pollution. It is because (CO2) Carbon dioxide of jet machine really harm for the equilibrium of atmosphere level.
Finally, these opinions catch the concentration of global community such as WWF (World Wide Federation). They argue that there is no doubt that technology is necessity of human but people should be wise to use technology. For example, people should be banned the technology which is using the high impact to nature such as high pollution transportation.
To conclude, after analyzing both views, it seems that technology should be used with appropriate way and the advancement of technology would be matched with natural life.
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citizens believe that is good opportunity.
citizens believe that it is a good opportunity.
technology is pivotal thing in modern life
technology is a pivotal thing in modern life
people should be banned the technology
people should be banned by the technology
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