Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways technology has affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development
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We now live in digital era where everything based on technology. Since technology is growing increasingly, we can not avoid the needs of its use in our daily life. Computer, mobile and gadgets are a number of electronic devices that developed rapidly due to the increasing enthusiasts on the devices. It has effected the types of relationship we make, as a consequence it brings a negative development by some reasons as follows.
Mobile and other gadgets are becoming the easiest and fastest way to communicate and to keep in touch with our friends, families and colleagues either they live far away or close to us. We easily communicate with them without necessarily need to do it face to face. Chatting and texting are both the common way people used to communicate with others. Unfortunately, this is a striking difference with the way we communicate previously where people greeting each other, talking, inquiring something directly facing them with which they come to feel what interlocutor is saying.
Once I was surprised by an advertisement of the negative impact of technology in a relationship in which a person who is preoccupied by her/his smartphone tend to forget people nearby. A smartphone user consider them as nothing since they put all of her/his attention to the smartphone by which our relationship with others gradually become strained.
So, these both are communication ways which are effected negatively by technology. We used to communicate through electronic devices and are not aware of these negative effects on our true relationship.
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