Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can the government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is quite clear that the amount of waste allover the world is increasing day after another. Every single house produces a huge amount of rubbish every week. There have been many wonders and arguments about the cause of that extension of produced extras. Is it because people consumption have been increasing or is it because the way food and beverages are packed and transported is different!
In the old days, the amount of waste of a house was much more less than it is today. The woman of the house used to make use of everything she has and she does not throw anything unless it is really use...
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Sentence: So, I believe that the way food is wrapped plays a big role in the expantion of waste amount.
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