Nowadays young people are facing difficulties in getting employment after finishing higher studies. What problems does youth unemployment cause for an individual and for society. What measures can be taken to solve this problem.
The youth plays an integal part in contributing to the development of a nation. It has, however, become an upward trend to see an upsurge in unemployment of the young people inspite of attaining higher degrees. This essay will provide an overview of the impacts such problem gives rise to and recommend some potential solutions to overcome the mounting concern.
One of the most conspicuous problems of unemployment lies in its impact of leading an individual towards financial insolvency. Since it causes depression in the young and so they become victims of bad habits and criminal activities, th...
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No. of Different Words: 209 200
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