In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowdays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in small community.
In the modern era like now, a number of inhabitant’s lived in the village where they were born, many people moved from village to large city with wishes either increased their quality of life or got a good job, it mean’s people live has changed.
There were a number of benefit’s to living in a small village, firstly everyone were good healthy because there aren’t population in village. Secondly, resident’s felt more safe because there wasn’t crime in the village. By social perspective the advantages of living in small village were highly togetherness between some peoples other inhabitants, the reasons of highly togetherness it is because everyone in the villages knew everyone else. Outside of them there was mutual aid, everyone in village was respectful, so they were highly concern for every folk's which need helped.
Whereas, there were several disadvantage’s, less attention by governments to develop small village gave the negative impact to inhabitants of the there. The information received slowly because there were not good transportation or great accommodation to send the information from city to small village, for example case in my country, when the governments made a new national regulation, the small villages were late to received information. Government’s need three day's until one week to publish the information to the village’s.
All in all, in my humble opinion life people’s in village's calmer than life people’s in the city, particularly in capital town, and the people in the village will help each other. However until recently people's in village ware late receiving the information about update regulation from government in capital city.
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it mean's people live has changed.
it means people's life has changed.
Sentence: There were a number of benefit's to living in a small village, firstly everyone were good healthy because there aren't population in village.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Secondly, resident's felt more safe because there wasn't crime in the village.
Description: A noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to resident's and felt
Sentence: By social perspective the advantages of living in small village were highly togetherness between some peoples other inhabitants, the reasons of highly togetherness it is because everyone in the villages knew everyone else.
Description: A qualifier, pre is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to highly and togetherness
Government's need three day's
Governments need three days (why you like to put ' ?)
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