In the past people usually stayed in one place throughout their life These days people often move around They often live in several different places in their lifetime What are the advantages and dis advantages of both Give reasons for your answers and inc

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In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and dis advantages of both?

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant information from your own knowledge experience.

In the history, lifestyle of the people was stay in one place forever. However, modern people have the habit to nomad. They often live in some various places in their lifetime. This essay discusses benefit and weakness both of these views.

I am firmly believe that inhabitants who live in one place since they were born to die have many advantages. By socializing with many people, the inhabitants make their life more enjoyable. In small community, local people tend to very gracious. If we have some problems, they will happily attempt. Many people feel happy when they made some events in the ...

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Sentence: In the history, lifestyle of the people was stay in one place forever.
Description: The token was is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to was and stay

This essay discusses benefit and weakness both of these views.
This essay discusses benefit and weakness on both of these views.

I am firmly believe that
I firmly believe that

because there are was calm.
Description: two verbs in one sentence.

Sentence: For example, they would less education because the distance between their home and school was further.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, post-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to would and less

Sentence: However, modern people have the habit to nomad.
Error: nomad Suggestion: ?

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Sentence Length SD: 4.45 7.5
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