The pictures below show how someone can be tracked using an electronic tracking device. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
Given is the diagram that illustrates how it is possible to define people’s locations properly using special equipments such as satellites, towers, mobile phones and computers. It can clearly be seen that, places of people are detected through simple processes.
To begin with, at the first stage of the tracking process the device must be placed properly into a bag or clothing. After that, device receives data about the searched location from the satellites that are monitoring it. Eventually, transmitting occurs when acquired information is sent to the transmission tower in order to be re-t...
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 77
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan 85
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nation should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. 83
- The graph shows the unemployment rates in the us and japan between march 1993 and march 1999. 80
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