The pie chart and table below give information on tourist arrivals in Nepal in March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie chart and table below give information on tourist arrivals in Nepal in March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The given pie chart and the table show where travellers to Nepal came from and the rose in tourists quantity from March 2007 to 2008 in the same month.

In March 2008 the percentage of visitors came from Asia and Europe resides in the top of the chart with tiny amount of comparison, 38 percent and 37 percent. While the littlest total came from Australia, four percent. The rest of data shows 10 percent of strangers came from North and South America and 11 percent were from other states.

The table clearly illustrated the increment of total tourists who visited Nepal from 2007 to 2008 in the same month. Total of all tourists was 5.910 people. It showed that the comers had increased to 16 percent from year before. Visitors came from Asia just showed little increment, by 188 people. In the other hand, travellers from Europe and America had grown significantly.

In conclusion, the tourists who had destination to Nepal came from two main parts of the world, and in between March 2007 to 2008 the amount of comers increased from all the region on the chart. However, the growth from Asia was the least.

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