The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show changes in the distribution of population in different region of the world in 1900 and 2000. Overall,the total number of population increased to a large extent in only one century and most this growth occurred in the developing countries.
It is clearly seen from the chart that both Europe and Asia showed a decrease in the number of population. Population declined by a significant number in Europe from 25% to 14%, followed by Asia which experienced a 6% reduction in it's population size. On the other hand, Latin America's population tripled approximately from 3% to 8% an...
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- Many of the elderly need care and support from the family. To live in a care home is a best option. Do you agree or disagree? Provide your opinion. 75
- Finding a job for youth after leaving school has become more difficult.What problem does youth employment cause for individual and society? What measures can be taken to reduce the level of unemployment ? 57
- As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes Why does this happen How does this affect society 90
- Some people think that government should have different amount of holidays according to their profession. To what extent do you agree or disagree with? 95
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