The pie graphs shows greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030 The column chart shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison

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The pie graphs shows greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030. The column chart shows carbon dioxide emissions around the world.
Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main featuresб and make comparisons where relevant.

Given are two pie charts representing greenhouse gas emissions globally in 2002 and some predictions on this figures for 2030. Following column chart illustrates worldwide carbon dioxide emissions.

A glance at provided pie chart reveals the contribution of OECD in greenhouse gas emissions, making more than half (52%) of the global emission. This was followed by contributions of developing countries (38%) and transition economies merely 10%. Concentrating on forecast for 2030, it can be implied that dominant position of OECD will be yielded to developing countries, as the former will create 48% and the latter slightly less 43%. Overall contribution of transition economies will level off accounting for 9%, approximately the same as in 2002.

According to the column chart, gargantuan part of carbon dioxide emissions was created by transportation (6 billion tons), consumer (about 8.3 billion tons) and the largest contributor industry (10.3 billion tons). Nonetheless, this figure is expected to face decline in 2030 which will not influence the dominant positions. Waste combustion and other resources made the least contributions 0.5 and 0.4 billion tons. This figure is predicted to undergo insignificant downward trend during the following 28 years.

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