Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
Every four year, people wait for football world cup and Olympics to release their individual stress or international tension. During those events athletes show their best performance to make their country proud. These sporting occasions proved that countries forget their stress and tension during watching or preparing for world cup or Olympics. This essay will discuss how those countries release tension and show the patriotic emotions.
First of all, during world cup, countries that are against each other forget their tension and compete to each other with in healthy and peaceful environment. For instance, in the past Greek and roman interrupt their battles and participate in the games. Furthermore, these events bring world closer to each other. For example, some countries such as Palestine and Israel forget dispute and they play in the peaceful and healthier atmosphere.
Similarly, international sporting events bring benefits to developing countries where the people facing of hunger, unemployment, poverty and lack of receiving higher education. For example, country such as Brazil, facing the same problem which leads the crime rate higher. When the events held in the developing countries. As a result people of that country receive enormous benefits, such as jobs, and other several benefits. People forget their tension and show the patriotic emotions. Ratio of the crime rate decrease in many fold. Moreover, people wear the painted flag shirts and paint the face with flags and this competition brings the families and neighbor closer even rival gangs watch the game peacefully.
In conclusion, popular sports events mitigate the tension and stress individually and internationally. And, people show the patriotic emotion and reduce the crime rate nationally and internationally.
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