Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Prominence is considered to have all-embracing influence on multiple of issues which are connected with human behavior. Some people believe that things people are keen on are directly linked to people’s attitude in estimating whether it is conspicuous or not. In this essay, I am going to discuss why there is a reality in that behavior and reasons why people’s may alter in due course.
It is undeniable fact that some people are not always passionate about what is popular. In other words, popularity is taken as a major prerequisite for their desire. Therefore, those people tend to entertai...
- Young people in modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation Why is this the case What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people 30
- In the past sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by desire to win a match or to break world records These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and opportunity to be famous What massage does this send to young people and ho 53
- In many countries children are engaged in some paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility What are your opinions on this 47
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive What are your opinions on this 88
- In recent years, some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside.This situation might bring some problems for the country as a whole.What are these 80
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