With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of
the past.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Technology evolution changed not only the devices we use to get information, but also the sources we use to consider. The internet, for instance, is influencing the way we approach news, passing from daily newspapers to last minute web news. In my opinion, newspapers will be soon replaced by several forms of digital information.
First of all, the internet allows people to keep updated about particular events or general news. This is something unthinkable just reading newspapers, because the latter are published just once per day. Therefore, if someone desires to follow a particular situatio...
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Thanks, I'm trying to improve
Thanks, I'm trying to improve in this way.
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Well, good luck and all the best!
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